Staring into the star-shine, waiting for the dawn of my dreams;
stranded pieces of hope loitering above the sparkling streams,
Near, yet so far away stood alone the darkening horizon,
Found another companion,who was also waiting with anticipation..
Waiting for a sky not as azure,for a wind a little pure;
For a soul full of love; for an evergreen cove;
A place which doesn't have the need of rhymes,
Where shadows don't mess up the lights,
And lights don't mess up the shadows,
Where grey and black are a shade apart,
there, on the other-side of life-dream-reality,, I will be waiting.......
Excellent and full of hope!!
ReplyDeleteSurreal but it always happens when you are in love. I guessed that the companion you mentioned in the poem is the one.
ReplyDeleteYour way of writing has the echoing effect that a literary piece should have.
ReplyDeleteHere is a to a new follower! :-D
@vyankatesh--- thanks a lot :)
ReplyDelete@nethra--- yeah,,, wait for the "one" .. u hit the bull's eye :D
ReplyDelete@enchanta-- thanks a lot....
ReplyDeleteand quoting u-- welcome aboard :P
Wow! awesome poem :) :)
ReplyDelete@madhumati-- thanks a lot :)
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